I was inspired by The Orchid Pavilion gathering of 353 CE which was a cultural and poetic event during the Six dynasties era, in China. The gentlemen (42 literati) had engaged in a drinking contest: rice-wine cups were floated down a small winding creek as the men sat along its banks; whenever a cup stopped, the man closest to the cup was required to empty it and write a poem. This was known as “floating goblets” (流觴, liúshāng). In the end, twenty-six of the participants composed thirty-seven poems.
Wife, as my life fades with the closing
sun, weeds now overtake linen paths driven
into the wilderness,
I have no strength to fight them,
and soon you must walk this way alone
though my heart is warm still –
but later, I will watch for you
and know the crinkled nose on your dirty face
as your dainty fingers dig delicately
because you are such a gentle flower,
I know you would not want to hurt them.
I am sorry how high the weeds will grow
since there is no one to take my place or to walk
you across the orchid bridge, but it has such
a fine elbow, a kind arm hanging over the stream –
when you walk do not look for the rice cups
and scoundrel ghosts drinking Huangjiu –
they who always beat me – but there is no disgrace,
I wrote a poem – and since the current was
lazy, I wrote another and another and another –
especially for you.
This is delicious!
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Thank you.
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You’re so amazing at this ❤️
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Thank you so much for those kind words.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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I love this one. Very nice.
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Thank you.
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Ah, Anita, once more you have shared with the world, your devoted followers your exceptional talent of Writing/Poetry. So beautiful, emotional, heartfelt are your creations. And the photo, the history of ‘floating goblets,’ …such a Fabulous Poetic/Poetry Artist. 😉
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Thank you very much, Dorna Hainds, whoeveryouare.
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I like the idea of a lazy current. Clever concept.
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Thank you.
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Thank you for liking the video. The lyrics speak to me.
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Interesting and original, this really captured my interest. Beautiful.
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Thank you. I like to read some of the old Chinese poets and they are inspiring.
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Captivating and beautiful I love it
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Thank you, Morgan. I
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You’re welcome
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This is beautiful! Really caught my attention and withheld it throughout.
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Beautiful post!!
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Thank you, Leyla.
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