for d’Verse Haiburn Monday – Stars. Other entries here.
Once inside the auburn hush of the park, we stood like lonely aliens. I wafted his gaze from the clay cold park bench to the blue black chiffon and diamante sky. I took a deep breath and I asked him if he would craft for me a heaven above his steel blue, warming smile then drape each shoulder with it; perhaps even wrap me up firmly with the bow of his strong and loving arms, and later would he sing for me a Valentine and strum my heart using the notes from the ebony sky as we lay together enmeshed in whispered secrets woven into tall grass where the chorus of his serenade would dissipate to meet the sparkling angels glowing in the night? He turned to me with a twinkle in his eyes and said, “No, but I can juggle. And actually, a star is a luminous sphere of plasma held by its own gravity…now breathe.”
Explosion of stars
Artificial light withdraws
Nature’s filaments
I chuckled at his response to your great expectations: “No, but I can juggle…” ha!
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Lol. Thanks.
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exquisite prose & so is the Haiku…”Explosion of stars” ah…Nature decked with such beauty, power and radiance ….
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Thanks so much for that and for reading.
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I love the colorful romantic spell you wove… and the practical response.
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Thank you, Brian.
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Beautiful, romantic descriptions and a charming masculine response at the end. 🙂
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Yes. Thank you very much.
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I love what you did here.. such romance and the light shines through… but I guess in reality it’s more physics than magic… maybe it’s just like love.
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Yes. Physics has its own magic. Thanks Bjorn.
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LOVE the “no, but I can juggle” response 🙂
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Lol. Thank you, Brian.
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Wow….a truly romantic haibun without sloppy sentiment! I loved this, and your descriptions are beautiful. And I laughed at “No, but I can juggle”…..LOL. The haiku was perfect at the end.
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You are such a skilled writer. The descriptions in the prose part, climaxed by the haiku, just wonderful.
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I much appreciate you reading it and I thank you for those kind words.
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oh this. this just melts me. ❤ beautiful, very beautiful.
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Thank you, Rose.
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I was woven in the grass with your awesome words and felt this bic diamantic nightly sky with you. I love juggling with your wishes like fragile stars, made from plasma, gravity and hope. Each star smiling a little light for your wishes coming true.
I wish you a wonderful brighten Late Summer Day. Here in Germany, sun start laughing now.
Yours Karfunkelfee from Germany✨
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Thank you very much and for your poetic comment.
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